On Friday there was a party at night. The party was to celebrate some girl's 15th birthday; lately I've been getting tired of going because I see that I'm the big guy of the party, in age of course because I'll always be the big guy if we get into the height matter. Normally there are three type of people in these parties: the young ones who were so exited to go to their first party, the right-aged ones who have a great time dancing with friends and the big guys who are five years older than the smallest guy there. I had an invitation but German was ahold of it so I went to his house and watched kick-ass to burn time. We got there together with our invitations.
"I think I felt a drop of rain!" I said with enthusiasm without knowing what would follow.
"I don't think it's gonna rain today." German assured me.
"If you say so..." I responded.
Almost immediately, after saying hello to some people it started to rain, hard. We were all wet and crumpled all together, I got exasperated so Cesar and some friends went for me and we happily went to eat some tacos at encomenderos. Of course German was the hero of this story because he stayed there with his girlfriend but I actually got to enjoy myself like no one there.
"You can find the best tacos in the darkest times if you search for them."-(Fran, 1657 B.C.)
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ReplyDeleteFran- Ignore German's first few comments, but his last two are great suggestions. You definitely need to use more than two sentences and if you do that it will help you organize your ideas better. I know that you are a great descriptive writer so I wish that you would include more description, but I do appreciate the final message of this post. It made me laugh and I could picture you saying it, which is perfect! Thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading your changes! :)
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